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In The Bottle

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~In The Bottle~




People die when they get old but not you,
you ferment like wine getting better with age,
your lips are the tip of the bottle and I get drunk off your blood,

I look up to you and feel small,
When one foot is in the grave only your smile can cure me,
Inside you, the belly of the beast,

I gave you my warmth in the winter,
You held me as all the memories that broke you came flooding back,
I let you keep them from me,

Open you up,
What's inside the quiet man?
The one who suffered alone with love in his life,

You won't be there at all,
I don't know where my mind has gone,
Your shoulders are of a bottle of whiskey and I get drunk off your sweat,

I'm falling and you can't hang on to me,
You're far away in your nightmares,
I won't change inside you.





In The Bottle © J-Goth/Amanda P.
Written on 4/11/15, I understand that some of my poems are hard to get, but I do often write poems with messages that are more straightforward. This is one of them. I appreciate all comments and I hope you enjoy it. 
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MARCO-E's avatar
interpretation is, in large,part,what the reader brings w him/her, this, like all your writing, reaches that point where ,as a reader , it's identifiable...good stuff Amanda.. ( although, personally, i'd prefer Rum :)  )